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Still Learning

Please help me scrutinize this image so i can do better in my next session. Thank you all.

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I like it a lot! Nice details in the skin and I like her soft expression with the soft light.

There are a few highlights, like one on her left eyebrow and one on her neck that could be removed. Then I would just work on the skin of her neck as much as you did her face so that it's balanced.

Very gainful comment, thanks. The part of the eye brow is not a highlight its a scar. I admit i did not pay much attention to the neck area. Thanks mike, u are much appreciated.

There is somethings about this image that I really like but onething I am not keen on. The skin tone is too plasticie. The lighting is lovely, well done. The model is very attractive and the eyes shut works a treat. Finally, the earrings work very well.

thanks Ian

I like it a lot too and I also have to echo Mike Freestone's comment about the neck needing some work. For this particular portrait, I don't mind so much that the skin is "over processed" as it gives her an almost statue and timeless feel. And the closed eyes works like a charm here!

Thank you Christian