Four things. It looks just a little too dark, under exposed I would suggest. It is unusually warm, as if you have used an incadescent light with a daylight white balance. The hood is a little distracting because it is creased and better lit than the face. The dark side of the face might have looked better either darker or lighter, whereas it is neither dark or light in this shot.
The cropping is good and the expression is good too. Not a bad job.
Four things. It looks just a little too dark, under exposed I would suggest. It is unusually warm, as if you have used an incadescent light with a daylight white balance. The hood is a little distracting because it is creased and better lit than the face. The dark side of the face might have looked better either darker or lighter, whereas it is neither dark or light in this shot.
The cropping is good and the expression is good too. Not a bad job.
thanks. I would try to correct them in today's shoot.
Better?
Yes, that is better in several subtle but worthwhile ways.