Nice but a bit wide and loose, for me. I would crop tighter to make her more visually important, and for me, the lipstick's colour clashes with the dress, yellow red with blue red, not my thing, I do recognise that we Brits have a very modest and unexciting attitude to colour and many peoples can get away with colour combinations that we can't but non the less, these two reds together are uncomfortable, to me. but other than that it is pretty nice.
Keep up the good work. Focus on posing your models.
Nice but a bit wide and loose, for me. I would crop tighter to make her more visually important, and for me, the lipstick's colour clashes with the dress, yellow red with blue red, not my thing, I do recognise that we Brits have a very modest and unexciting attitude to colour and many peoples can get away with colour combinations that we can't but non the less, these two reds together are uncomfortable, to me. but other than that it is pretty nice.
Keep trying...