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Great Gatsby look

Hey everyone - I recently bought a backdrop - I used black seamless paper and will be trying different lighting everyday in my living room.
Constructive criticism is appreciated.

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I like it. Good looking girl, good quality light, and the styling is OK too. So what can I suggest as possible improvements? Perhaps it would look contrived but her eyes are a bit too near the edge of the glasses' lenses, a very slight repo to get them just away from the frames, a tad might be hetter. I think a touch of frequency separation on her skin would add a bit of the Gatsby perfetion. That'll do for now, I think.

Im gonna learn frequency separation now (via youtube). When editing I only did a few adjustments in lightroom but now I'll do this in CC and see the difference. I see what you mean about the glasses - I have to be more involved with models now and adjust things more.

Thanks

Yes her glasses only needed a slight push up her nose and job done. Best of luck with FS. That is somethinh i need to practice, having only just started to learn it.