Hello i am from germany and speak not so good english, but i want to take here the oportunity to get constructive critique for the photos i had shoot.
What do you think of this photo? What could be done better?
Hello i am from germany and speak not so good english, but i want to take here the oportunity to get constructive critique for the photos i had shoot.
What do you think of this photo? What could be done better?
It has the makings of a good photograph. I would have cropped it with less space above her head and without the tree on the right. I would have let her be darker, as she is in shade and I would have lightened the blacks of the distant trees. Her hand is distracting.
All that having been said, I think it is OK and almost good.
Agreed, too much wasted space at the top. I'd be interested in seeing a very tight crop. Crop part of the top of her head off, crop out hand as Ian mentions, but still be able to see trees (bokeh) on left side of image. I like the eyes and serious expression
Hi Ian and Jerome, thank you so much for your critique. I have tried to realize your recommandations but to crop out the hand is not working so good. The pic looks than to tight with only her head and shoulder. I dont know how to handle with this.
Here i have change a little bit the lightings on her and on the trees.
Jerome and I are thinking in much the same way. I did suggest the hand was irritating, but really I was thinking for any future shoots you might watch for similar problems. However, I have palyed with your image and although working from JPEGs is never going to allow a good edit, here it is, for what it may be worth.
Ok i have understand. İt looks better now. Thank you.