• 1
  • 0
fery novianto's picture

Hi, Greetings from Central Borneo.

Hi, my name is Fery. lives in central boreno - indonesia. I like photography as a hobby. and i want learning more in here.
I take a headshot and edited into BW in photoshop. my hope is more C&C (are welcome). thank you. Warm Regards.

Log in or register to post comments
6 Comments

That is a fabulous photograph, much more than a headshot, in my opinion. He looks amazing, and you have executed the work, very well. I would have prefered the dark shadow on his chest a little lighter, including more detail, but truthfully, I don't care, it is good for all to see.

Thanks for c&c Ian.

Very nicely done. I see no glaring issues with this shot - just a few esthetics. I would have removed the dark area sticking out from the top of your subject's right ear as it's a bit distracting. Also, I might have brightened his eyes just a bit, as the eyes are everything, especially in a photo like this. Other than that this is a really great shot. Well done!

thank you for c&c Mike.

Fine work. The interplay between the Paisley, the background and the figure in the subjects face is really cool. Opinion: I would leave the eyes as they are.

Awesome photo. However I would lighten the area around the eyes as they tend to get washed away in that dark patch area in the center of your subject's face. But overall I love the photo. Good luck