In my pervious post friends here in the community suggested that i was dragging the slider too much towards the right and needed to be more subtle. I tried processing this keeping all those feedbacks in mind. Would love to hear some feedback/criticism on this. Another effort to experiment all those youtube tutorials that i have been watching recently.
I like the photo, especially the depth and the diagonal created by the rocks. However, that leads my eye right towards the building which is very distracting, almost ruining the shot. Maybe Try cropping or framing differently to exclude that. As for the post, the only thing I may do it turn down the blue saturation a bit, but I personally suck at editing so take that with a pinch of salt.
Tyler
thank you tyler .. i will keep ur suggestions in mind ..
no problem! cheers
Yogesh,
I like the way the color saturation comes across in this image. Only you know how much blue was really there and I like the sand (warm) vs blue (cool) color tones in the composition. The composition with the building is so so. Tylers suggestion seems a good one. It looks like there are some nice shots to be made at this location.
Mike
thank you michael .. even i feel there is a picture in that place .. maybe i will have to spend some more time .. i will have to go back to that place again .. this time i will surely exclude the building ..
I like the building, fwiw, apart from the verticals diverging. The line of rocks pointing to it seems visually heavy-handed but the building in the gap between the trees looks really fine to me.
I am less keen on the foot-prints or whatever on the sand in the forground. In fact I would prefer the crop to be more wide-screen to eliminate the foreground. The sky is over-cooked but as a stylistic representaion, not too bad. At least the cardinal sin of bleaching out the highlights has been avoided. Altogether, a good job, imo.
was waiting for this Ian .. i have a feeling that along with photography i'll learn english too .. :)
If you intend to learn English from reading these comments, you might be better disregarding mine, with acronyms and the casual use of English slang.
i am not a native speaker .. i meant it in a very good way .. :)
Hi Yogesh,
I know you took it in a good way, and as I intended. Incidentally, your English is very very good. So, when responding to your postings I'll try to use my best English language, as I tend to use acronyms and some slang. American English and American slang are more universally well known, but it is still the language of the English people, so I'll try to honour it, for you.
Unfortunately, my spelling is not good and I sometimes type rather faster than I should, given my limited keyboard skills. So I do make many typographical mistakes, TYPOS.
All the best.
I think simply moving your camera closer to the waters edge would have improved this image a lot.
thank you paul .. i will surely do that next time m near that lake. Its -20 these days .. stuck inside my room .. :)