A lovely photograph, with beautiful tonality and matching mood. Perhaps I might have prefered her to be looking at the lens or slightly more towards the lens but I really like it as is. She looks beautiful, and that is the job. Her face is perhaps a touch over edited and has lost the texture that would make it seem real but because it is in shade, you get away with that a little more than if there had been direct light on it, which would make the texture-free skin look more plastic that it does here. Still over done though.
Her face arms, and scarf together are sculptural. The rest of the picture only diminishes the strength of that composition. Try cropping above her right bicep. I think it will be a stronger image.
A lovely photograph, with beautiful tonality and matching mood. Perhaps I might have prefered her to be looking at the lens or slightly more towards the lens but I really like it as is. She looks beautiful, and that is the job. Her face is perhaps a touch over edited and has lost the texture that would make it seem real but because it is in shade, you get away with that a little more than if there had been direct light on it, which would make the texture-free skin look more plastic that it does here. Still over done though.
Her face arms, and scarf together are sculptural. The rest of the picture only diminishes the strength of that composition. Try cropping above her right bicep. I think it will be a stronger image.