First time shooting on a rooftop.
This was shot in Manhattan, just before sun down.
would love constructive feed back.
Roof Top Portrait
First time shooting on a rooftop.
This was shot in Manhattan, just before sun down.
would love constructive feed back.
I like it. The girl looks beautiful,and very strong. The colours work very well as does the pose. The building on the left would be difficult to crop out from there I guess but if you had stopped it sloping it might have been better. A very stylish shot though, and the building woud be very easy to fix.
I don't like the way her arm cuts her outfit in half. The top part is lacy, and could almost be lingerie. She has nice muscle tone in her arms, which made me think she could be in yoga pants. Crop out the magenta either vertically or horizontally, and see how that changes the image.
Striking photo! Love the colors and the model; you brought out her skin tones beautifully. I do think it's cropped too tightly on the top; she feels a little hemmed in from the building on the left; and (the first thing i noticed) is the pose doesn't feel too natural.