This shot was taken in my learning process about portraits, model is my sister. I'm still learning and a real beginner what to improve all my aspects before i start shoot few real models, Help me improve.
I see that i learn a lot each day, which helps me get better, i have used different retouching/Lighting techniques on all my shots just trying to find the ups and downs on all my working area.
Love to hear all your thoughts its gonna be a additional learning for me.
The sadness does not come through as much in this image as the last one. I think it will be harder to convery sadness when looking into the lens, Not certain about that but guess so. Also I am not a fan of the 35mm format used upright without being cropped more square, just a persoanl bette noir. Main problem here the big L in the background. It serves no purpose and is both distracting and unattractive.