I think you're on the right track here. Composition seems a bit off with that dead space to the right. and it's not very sharp. Just keep shooting - it seems like you know what you're looking for. You just need to polish things up.
I think you're on the right track here. Composition seems a bit off with that dead space to the right. and it's not very sharp. Just keep shooting - it seems like you know what you're looking for. You just need to polish things up.