Silvio Richetto on Fstoppers

Richetto Music LLC

Two times Grammy Awarded Sound Engineer, Music Producer, several platinums-albums, I've spent most of my life working in the music industry but I always was into photography. I Don't consider me a professional photographer. I decided to join the Fstoppers community to learn and be critiqued.
One of the things that makes one get better is a reason why a "Needs Work" was given to a picture. Please when voting, describe the reason for your rate so I can sharpen my skills. Thank You ... Your rates are highly appreciated but your reasons are more important to me.

Gear Bag

Nikon D850
Interfit Foldable Beauty Dish
Interfit Heat-Resistant Strip Softbox
Godox XProN TTL Wireless
Godox AD600B
Godox AD200
Nikon 105mm f/2.8
Nikon AF NIKKOR 35mm
Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm
Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 70-200mm
Nikon D800