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1.99 - "Needs Work" 

Please comment and give me your opinion on this picture, I just started taking photography seriously and bought an A7iii but this picture was taken with a rebel T2i... I know, way too old and basic, but still.
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I hope that you like it.
Model @ivanachavezd

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7 Comments

michaeljin's picture

I feel like there's a lot of room above the head which unbalances it. In my opinion, either frame it tighter or step further away so there's similar breathing space around the other sides of the model.

Melissa García Ontiveros's picture

thanks! you are right. I'm keeping that in mind :)

michaeljin's picture

Best of luck with your new camera. :)

GLENN JOHNSON's picture

I agree that a tighter crop would improve the composition.

vito servideo's picture

Would look better with a different crop

Jared Wolfe's picture

I would really like this if it was tighter. So much negative space. Hair and makeup are great. Really fun.

Yasir Saeed's picture

A tighter crop, and maybe pin her dress in the back, so it's a tighter fit.