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1.73 - "Needs Work" 

I took this image on a train in Hong Kong. I am so drawn by the expression on the subject's face...what is she thinking?

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I could be wrong, but it feels like the subject has been overly dodged, to the point that it feels unnatural. I think a subtle vignette would do enough to draw the viewer's eye to the middle of the frame.