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2.04 - "Needs Work" 
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Hi Luis.

I found this image arresting, it made me stop and think; but not necessarily in a good way. I simply don't understand the image or what you are trying to achieve.

The building in the background doesn't seem to contribute much to the image, and instead proves to be distracting.

I really want to like this, but I can't.

It may be significantly improved by cropping out the top part of the image, leaving you with a striking low key image of the two women.

Cheers.

William, thanks for your comment. it's a strange image indeed and even I can't explain it exactly. I can give you the context.
It's a street photography image. The girls were sitting there by change and the light from the two windows above caught my attention as it was perfectly placed.
It looks surreal to me because of that strangeness I quite like it and was curious to know what the community felt about it.

Cheers!