Keeping things simple with an on campus shoot in NorCal. Since the majority of flowers were dead I decided to use them for colored bokeh pop instead of keeping them in focus.
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best graduation picture ever , congratulations
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Great photo.
Thank you!
Great model and love the natural light. Pose could have been stronger. I would also liked to see more room around the subject.
Thanks! It’s actually HSS and there was nothing but dead stuff behind her unfortunately so there wasn’t room.
I agree with Mark. I would probably give this a 4 or 5 but the image is too tight. Creates too much tension around the edges. It needs more breathing room. The lighting, outfit, pose, the background and face expression is all really good but just too tight. You could use content aware little by little to give it more breathing room in all sides. Or possibly even grab some information from another image (that was shot on the same time) and paste it on here to extend it. And if all fails, you can use the clone tool and digital paint as well :)
Awesome image though. One of the best here. Bravo.
Appreciate the compliment and the feedback!
Best on the board so far, I gave it 4 stars
Appreciate it Frank !