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2.08 - "Needs Work" 
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Antony Trivet Samantha Bunns

Thanks Samantha Bunns on the retouching am still newbie...hopeful will manage to understand it.

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Antony Trivet Samantha Bunns

True true

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Andy Marek

I was torn between a 3 and 4 star rating. The skin does appear overly smooth. There are some hot spots on her face from lighting. The pose is different, but I like it.

I gave you a four only because I know people would be rating it low.

A one-star is No thought put into it, simply a snapshot. You used lighting, even if a little hot for my taste. You captured an expression and had the focus drop off behind the model.

I do wonder, the more I look at it if this was not shot in a studio and composited on the background.

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Antony Trivet Andy Marek

Thanks Andy Marek actually this image and the other image on the rail guard we shot them on the same day.. this one I used the strobes but for the rail guard was purely Natural light.

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Antony Trivet Joseph Gonzalez

hahahah Joseph Gonzalez true true but raising one of her leg.

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