I like this posing and one light lighting- it seems to work well for this young man. My criticism would that I want all of the face in focus - although, often having the near eye in focus is good enough, the nose and lips are a little bit out of focus (maybe it's the website?) and I think those being in focus is important in this case because the simplicity of the photo (which I really like), I want to see more of the face in focus.