Portraits of Senior Citizens

Yikes, a beautiful 60 year old. I like what you tried here but there are several things I don't like. Looking right into the armpit of the statue is not pleasant to me as a viewer. It's as if the statue is saying, "Smell my pit." The strong light across her chin detracts greatly. I'd prefer not to see the logo of the shirt, also distracting. I feel the statue is too strong in the composition taking attention away from the prime subject. Overall I like the use of the straight lines and leading lines. And I like the statue on the left which is setback and not distracting from he subject. I very much like the subtleness of the colors- not often seen so it's pleasing to me.