The first supper

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knoll-heiko avatar

I am very sorry for giving your image only two stars because it has a lot of potential. Mainly I think the faces are overly lit and the lighting is too concentrated on their faces. Secondly I would lower the camera quite a bit, getting rid of the foreground with the bottom of the tablecloth. I realize it was a lot of work getting this image done and I suppose you shot each person seperately, yet the lighting doesn´t really set the mood for me. Good luck and keep on shooting, Heiko.

I feel like one little detail could make this infinitely better. If the light was all coming from the same direction - with the light coming from wherever it make the individual subject look best, it instantly comes off a bit jarring. Still gave it 3 stars though!

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