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3.26 - "Solid" 

One StellaPro Reflex S in the Rembrandt position but I had the subject swivel into a profile position. Dress by Sew Trendy gowns. Photographed on a Sony A7IV with a Sigma 24-70 2.8

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Lovely image! Clearly you are pro. If I can find possible improvements to pass on- I just wish her fingers on top were less clenched and softer looking as they distract from the face. I also wish the pose displayed her shape better. I'm guessing she's standing flat foot. One thing I tell all my female clients - even if the feet are not in the crop, bend the knee or cross the feet. It really does create a different vibe and energy. Awesome job!

Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it. I agree her fingers were slightly clenched. Her feet were staggered though and not flat. It could be the way the dress drapes across her frame. But sound advice from you none the less. Thank you.