Feathered Lightning using a big softbox (120-140cm). Tight Crop for an intense feeling. Catchlight is everything.
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I agree about the catchlight but there's nothing to call your attention to it. I didn't even notice until I read your description.
Without, Eyes look Dead.
I agree but they're still very subtle. Maybe I'm just too old to notice such details. :-)