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Alan Brown's picture

Downtown express

Ready for the downtown train and ready to party!

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2 Comments

keeping the composition skewed appealed to me.
leaving only "via express" and remove all other upper text could be more meaningful?
Overall good frame.

Thanks for your positive feedback and rating Vijay.

Your suggestion of limiting the upper text is interesting. Perhaps the broken text above 'via Express' would help but I think the text to the right aids the story.