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2.36 - "Needs Work" 
jowell protasio's picture
jowell protasio

Used Elia's technique to blend time together with long exposure. Taken at Manarola Italy.

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Gregory DeVos

The image feels a bit flat to me.

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jowell protasio Gregory DeVos [Edited]

thanks for your input. now that you said it, it kinda does now. i knew something was missing... i need to separate the background (clouds) to the mountain a bit better.

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Gregory DeVos jowell protasio

10 points of vibrance or saturation on the buildings might help too

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jowell protasio Gregory DeVos

yes. i edited it again and brought up the buildings a bit more (+1 exp) and then added a bit of vibrance helped. oh wells, live and learn. thanks again! :)

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Gleb Karpetkin

I don't know, I like the colors! It looks more realistic/cinematic this way. But the overall image looks a bit out of focus to me somehow. Just a site compression?

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