I actually like this one a lot and think it deserves a higher rating than it is getting. Some things I might do if I were editing this would be to bring up the shadows in the foreground to provide the viewer some more interesting things to look at. I get you were going for a certain look but I think this can be done while still preserving the same feel you have achieved with this edit. I also might clone out the cloud in the upper right or crop in. I find that cloud distracting and think it takes away from the picture.