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1.84 - "Needs Work" 
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johnny k

Snapshot in south africa.

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Gary Giddens

I like this a lot but thinks the right side does not add to the overall story to the photo and should be cropped out. If it was environmental to the shot, yes, but here, no. The rest is very good.

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johnny k

I completely agree, But couldn't crop it any different without cropping the left side too. I'll see about uploading a different crop

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johnny k

Slightly better version > https://fstoppers.com/entry/462827

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