Freshly graduated from college, she is a single mother who overcame incredible odds to graduate with honors...Nailah dreams
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I rated this 2 stars. It is a good, clean image, though I feel the composition could be better. If she were placed on the left side of the frame and there would be more space in the direction she's looking which would be a better photo in my opinion. Also, it needs to be straightened, and maybe given a little less head space. Otherwise its a great image.
Thanks Danny!
I agree with Danny - giving more space for the model to be looking into would improve the storey.
Might also be improved by pulling back the highlight on her arm so they aren't blown out.