This photo of Amanda was taken in Denver, CO with the Sony A7IV at the Sony 35mm 1.4 GM lens.
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I think you're going for a "hard" or edgy look but you're using a soft light. Bare bulb or direct flash with perhaps some fill might be more suitable for the this to feel like a more cohesive image. Or maybe you wanted a soft look in which case the subjects body language needs to change. I hope that makes sense.
It could be a solid shot or not depending on what this image was planned to be used for
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