How would you improve this portrait?

Looking for feedback and critiques. What would you do differently with this shot?
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Creative Black & Whites

This is my first post to this group. I have recently taken a liking to doing b&w photos. I've seen that black and...

Trying out some B&W photography first time, classic vintage look.

The model wanted to do something a little classic old looking nature with some soft lighting. So I thought I would...

Kat

Loving bnw at the moment Only using one light
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Various B+W Images From 2017

A Selection of B+W Images I shot during 2017 with my Olympus OMD EM1 MkII and various Olympus Pro Lenses. I love the...
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Some wings.

Hi I'm new on this website and just wanted to share with you one of my black and white fine art photos. Any critique...
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Erika

A few fall shots of my favorite model and friend Erika.

swordcraft action

a few images of swordcraft roleplay action held recently at our local park. The participants come from all walks of...

It happened in Hollywood Beach...

I was on an afternoon walk on Hollywood Beach last year and I ran into this amazing young girl. Thinking back, I should...
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Lady Slipper Orchid

This is a Paphiopedilum, also known as a Lady Slipper Orchid. Size of bloom is about 1 3/4 inches wide and about 2 3/8...

Black and White in Black & White

Hello, all. This is a concept shot I did recently. The idea was to convey energy and emotion, like love, lust, sex, and...
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Ways of Making You Talk

I had to order the beret and turtleneck for this shoot, but forgot to order pants. This setback did not stop Christina...
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Dalton Black and White

Model - Dalton Studio work.

Snow in the city

Snowy view of Notre Dame Cathedral the date after a snow storm hit Paris.

London

London

stillness

the industrial side of my city in winter

Big Island Wandering

Hey all! Newbie here, in fact, this is my first post on fstoppers! Here are some B&W photos from my recent vacation...

Model: Gustavo Ruben Valenzuela

Model: Gustavo Ruben Valenzuela Photographer: Bram van Dal Camera settings: Shutter Speed: 1/125 Aperture: F2.0 Iso:...

Model: Simon van den Berg

Model: Simon van den Berg Photographer: Bram van Dal Camera settings: Shutter Speed: 1/125 Aperture: F1.8 Iso: 100 Lens...

Huan Huan Panda!

Huan huan new parent waiting the birth of his new child...