The Beauty of the Beast
another solo attempt
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Nev Clarke
Sand Porn
I really enjoy creating something different with drones. I've had the Mavic now for about four weeks and I absolutely love it.
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Last: May 20, 2026
Don Don
Single Light Headshot
Client came and needed headshots immediately. Set up a single Broncolor Para 133 in the dining room. Delivered 20 pics. Setup, Shoot, Edit and delivered within 30 minutes.
Norton Dudeque
Mananciais da Serra, Piraquara, Brazil
This is a water reservoir for the city of Curitiba, Brazil
3 Comments
Looks like a successful interplay of the baroque and sinister diagonals. You may have to tell me to eat a bag of carrots, but it appears the 'bulb' of the bloom is resting on their intersection, which really does good for this composition. I like how the 'spikes' , stem, and the blurred bulb create an unbalance.
The bad news: the jury is still out on the blurred bulb. My first reaction feels it's a distraction. It pulls my eye from the center which reminds me of a city under siege. (Sorry, too much WWII history bouncing around inside my skull.)
The longer I study the composition I feel like the center is strong enough to hold the viewer's attention. It tells a story of a failing world meeting its fate.
Again, nice job.
Thank you again for detail feedback. Much appreciated !
I agree with John. Even before reading his comments my immediate reaction was one of the eye being pulled down and out of the frame.
I have tried cropping, which I feel works a bit better for me (and understand it may not work for others).