Hey guys I'm a portrait photographer based in Germany.
Took this photo in a car garage 2 days ago. luckily we had a great golden hour and the warm, soft light was beautifully falling on her face.
I'm really happy how to the photo turned out.
Nevertheless, is there anything in your opinion how i could have made the shot better ?
Shot on a Sony a7r III + 35mm 1.4
f/1.4
1/800s
iso 100
Watch is a little distracting. Background could be compositionally more interesting. Besides that its a nice shot.
thank you dude. Yeah you're right. watch is to big and to black for that shot.
AWESOME
SO PRETTY
many thanks dude!
Very nice work. Maybe adding some separation of her hair from the black background would have been better?
I would agree with this, but my only thought (and being VERY picky) is I would like a wider crop on her, centered more, so we can see more of her elbow/hips.
Lovely image - I'll be in Germany in a few days. Love the country.
For the image thoughts, her left hand on her face... I would say to wrap her hand more to see more of her fingers. Also I would jump into post and adjust the colour of her nails a bit. The green is lovely but distracting to the other tones in the image (for me anyway).
Nice light. You know about the watch and background. Keep photographing. Keep learning.