Canon EOS 70D. Using Yongnuo YN560-III with a reflective umbrella.
Retouch: Viktoria Anufrieva (https://500px.com/vik9528)
Canon EOS 70D. Using Yongnuo YN560-III with a reflective umbrella.
Retouch: Viktoria Anufrieva (https://500px.com/vik9528)
I think there's too much tree. It's taking up almost half the photo. I'd consider cropping to 4x5 so you still get the tree, subject, and the greens. Also, you could burn the tree some so it's not so bright.
Something to try out next time is don't have the umbrella directly facing the subject. In this scenario, have the umbrella face more to the right so it would just feather the light on her. This may soften the light a little, maybe more interesting shadows, but, will definitely keep it off the tree.
And, why does her right hand look weird. It's way blurry.