Could use some feedback on a personal project

I guess this isn’t necessarily a portrait but I’m relatively new to using this function of the website and was...
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Joy Maringa By Perky Arts

Joy Maringa by Perky Arts Joy Maringa Lip Artist Makeup Artist Visual Artist Nairobi, Kenya

Lock Down Creativity

I've read encouragement to 'shoot through the lock down'. Probably good advice. In that vein, I grabbed this photo of...
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Chole

During a studio fashion shoot I did a head shot of the model for her portfolio. Two light set up.
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Mwanamke

Last shoot I did before 21 days lock-down that is commencing on the 26th March 2020.
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Cristina

"Low Key Fine Art Beauty Portrait" Model: Cristina Photographer/Retoucher: Dan Lubbers WEBSITE: https://goo.gl/YTtkiF...
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Cara in patent leather

Cara can flow pose with no direction from me. Occasionally, I'll ask for one thing or another. On this shot I said "...
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Ready for the ball... CC Please

My daughter had her first formal dance last night, the ROTC Ball at her high school. Full Disclosure: I'm no portrait...
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Kayli in Las Vegas

An image from my Las Vegas workshop. I had a medium size softbox to the right with a fan blowing up. But her hair is...
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Apple

https://www.instagram.com/nirmalvedhachalam

BTS & Final Render in Studio

Image 1 showcasing simple set up on Lighting Technique
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Golden Hour Marina Shoot

Fun session with Alma all those years back!
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Beauty in Studio

87cm Steel Beauty Dish -White on axis with kicker using CTB 1/4 Gel and strip box to model left - shot with Sony a7Riv...
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Flamenco

Image from my workshop in Colorado Springs. Shot with a CTO on a bare flash from behind and a small softbox to the left...
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Portrait Session with Sam (Outdoors & Studio)

Here are a few images of my friend Sam. I would like some feedback on them to see what I can do to make even better.
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Octopus

we actually washed it before putting it in a mouth

Just a portrait

Tried to take a portrait of wife
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Good Models Makes Photography Fun

This is my friend Lindsay. She is an actress/model. Can't get to shoot with her often. But when she is free we get...
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Dramatic

For the love of photography

1920's

Shot on Sony A7RII 85mm F9 1/160s iso 100 AD600pro x5 @ericsanchezphotography . ( insta )