1st- she looks awesome! The overall concept of this photo is really great. However, with all of the bright stuff behind her, none of it is shining on her. The brightest thing in this image is something in front of her, but it should probably be that big of a freaking moon. Obviously, you’re going to like the funnier subject, but you should give her a hair light and maybe even also a kicker to simulate all this bright screens in moonlight coming from behind her. It will add highlights to the really dark parts of her outfit, make her pop up of the screen. You could also add some highlights on to the guns which are so dark that I didn’t notice she was actually holding them at first. I hope that I have given you some constructive observations.