Please critique. Took this when I was 17 exploring my city. Thought it fit the theme. It's not the sharpest, I took this with a scuffed lens and an old camera.
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It's interesting but I have no idea what I'm looking at. Is he holding a gun ? Sunglasses ? The T-shirt with the yellow logo or something is distracting too, and his forehead looks like it's clipping. Some dust, a clearer subject and I think you may have something.
Thanks Nick! He's holding a camera lol. Yeah I agree with everything. Unfortunately I don't have the sharpest camera/lens but I think the imperfections help convey the emotion.
Cool barn, I like the lighting. I think the subject needs a better prop, something that tells a story.
Totally agree, William. Thanks for the critique I appreciate it! The shot wasn't really planned I just told him "stand over there" lol