I took this image inside the train, moments before it left. I was fascinated by the way he waited for his train. Distanced from other people on the platform but lost in thought.

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user-267817 avatar

Maybe crop the image or clean the background. Also, I'd straighten it! Nice otherwise!

Thank you for the critique, your suggestions are very useful. Just for clarification, what do you mean by cleaning the background?

user-267817 avatar

In photoshop you could remove the random people. They take focus away from the subject and ruin the mood a little bit. Just take away some distractions really.

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