Studio Work

Good posing, and good lighting.....Well done.

I agree with Mr. Popescu’s comments overall. Very dynamic shot - exciting work! I think there is too much white white highlights (loss of detail makes that part “flat”). Eyes open is typically more enticing, and would add some more life. Being super critical (though this shot is great) I wish there were more hair highlight on the right side of her head for better separation.

Nice shot, and you've gotten some good feedback already. I definitely agree with the strength of the pose, but the distraction of the folded-down garment. I'd also ask if you were looking for it to be a sexy-dance-strip feel (thus the garment) or a figurative art nude (which is what the lighting feels like, as well as the closed eyes). It's perhaps possible to both, but I think some of the feedback is because of that split of possible intention.

I'd guess you had two softboxes, right? Unless there's a lot of reflection on the other side.