Suggestions for improvement

This is an image that I feel holds potential but have been unable to edit to any sort of satisfaction.

Comments on good/bad aspects of the image encouraged, and I's really love to hear any suggestions on how/if the image might be improved.

All comments will be treated with equal respect and appreciation, whether they be from novices or seasoned ICM veterans - your voice matters!

Let your creative hair down and let me know what you feel.

Thanks in advance.

6 Comments

I like the image. My thought is that there should be a "splash" of color on the first image. Red maybe.

On the second image a bright light, maybe the sun or moon.

Just my thoughts. Thanks for posting

Thanks for the feedback Craig, I'll have to give this further thought.

Is this cropped? I would like to see not as wide and more of the top and the bottom of the frame. It feels too compressed to me.

Nice. I like the color image. Just a little hue or temperatur fine.tuning.

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