I think your lighting is very well conceaved and executed although the bright side of her face seems too hot, relative to the rest of her, so reducing the power and adjusting the key light slightly down from her face would have evened it up, somewhat. I think the model's fitness is very well illustrated but why on a dining-suite carver? Surely just a plain studio surface or more neutral surface like a wooden floor, as in a gym or ball-room for instance would have been more appropriate.
A very good effort though and I am sure it will have been very well received.
I think your lighting is very well conceaved and executed although the bright side of her face seems too hot, relative to the rest of her, so reducing the power and adjusting the key light slightly down from her face would have evened it up, somewhat. I think the model's fitness is very well illustrated but why on a dining-suite carver? Surely just a plain studio surface or more neutral surface like a wooden floor, as in a gym or ball-room for instance would have been more appropriate.
A very good effort though and I am sure it will have been very well received.