I like the lighting and overall color tone of the image. Subjects appear too directed though. I believe something more natural would have worked better here.
Nice. I'd like to see more light and contrast on the standing models legs to give stronger lines. The guys grip on her arm works well. His right hand on the red heads hair does not work - If he's going to be gripping it, it should have an impact on her posture and create a greater dynamic. For example, if it jerks her head back then you could work in a teasing interplay with the model below. The incomplete background doesn't work for me. I'd prefer it to be full or more obviously messy/tattered throughout.
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Rock on
I like the lighting and overall color tone of the image. Subjects appear too directed though. I believe something more natural would have worked better here.
Nice. I'd like to see more light and contrast on the standing models legs to give stronger lines. The guys grip on her arm works well. His right hand on the red heads hair does not work - If he's going to be gripping it, it should have an impact on her posture and create a greater dynamic. For example, if it jerks her head back then you could work in a teasing interplay with the model below. The incomplete background doesn't work for me. I'd prefer it to be full or more obviously messy/tattered throughout.