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Really would help to be cropped tighter. Any action or motion, which is what you are showing, gets lost in all the negative space.

Thank you very much for the comment. For me, this photo has two parts. There is the stop action of the snowball fight where I thought the emotion was captured well. However, it is also a photo of a simple untouched snow field with a gentle curve carrying the eyes back to the center. The aesthetic of that playful moment caught in that tranquil setting is what makes the photo for me. That is of course subjective, and I recognize that the photo does not have in-your-face impact to stop the passing viewer, which might be more present if cropped. Not the greatest photo, but for me there is something interesting in the composition.