Watermark is way too big - it distracts from what would otherwise be a grand scene. Colors seem muted too - blues (sky) and greens (grass in immediate foreground) are off. Highlights in the clouds are clipped as well.

Mountain looks great, color aside. Looks tact-sharp

I really like the person sitting in the bottom left, but I didn't even notice her until after I'd looked at the image for nearly a minute. Something to draw out the contrast there to make her more noticeable might help.