Apartment on Wilshire Corridor, Los Angeles

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michaeljin avatar

Great job. My nitpick would be the space to the left of the cube in the foreground. Given how it's just a sliver, I wonder if it might have just been better to move it over to the left slightly to close it up.

Thank you for the feedback! I actually tried it both ways but ended up settling with leaving a bit of a gap.

michaeljin avatar

Well I'm certainly glad to hear that you tried it both ways and made a decision. That's the thing I've learned about hypothetical adjustments. It may not have the same impact in reality as it does in my own head.

Great composition, really like that the round lamp and the round carpet are centered and that the cube and chair create a diagonal line as well as the triangle between the cube, chair and lamp. The lighting is great and its good to see the view out of the window.

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