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Upstairs

May challenge - Depth

use of contrast to lead you "inside: .. at least this was the objective to make a "boring" image interesting and 3D.

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Hi Marius. As Jennifer points out there is a lot (of good things) going on in this image and I feel the 'upstairs message gets a bit lost.

I think that if you wish to maintain that story a closer crop may help eliminate some of the distraction. Here's a quick edit just to demonstrate, but as always, your perception is the one that counts.

Appreciate the feedback Alan . Point taken