All 3 need some fill light on her left side.
#1 pose is "meh", nothing special; plus horrible shadows and the sleeve tattoo doesn't go with the image.
#3 pose is beginner like, the water splash is amateurish.
#2 would work if you had some fill light and she didn't have that sleeve tattoo
There's no need to be critical of a model's appearance simply because you don't like something about it.
Dave, I think the first image is the strongest of this set. That said though, I think those reeds in the background could be removed and it might make the image that much stronger. The few that are visible in that image only serve as something that take my attention away from the subject.
Thanks Michael. The 1st is my favourite. The reeds are a bit distracting now that you mention it.
I agree with you on the comments about the models appearance. I don't see what difference her tattoo makes. Comments like "pose is meh" is hardly constructive either Brian, but I take on board what you said about the images needing some fill.
All 3 need some fill light on her left side.
#1 pose is "meh", nothing special; plus horrible shadows and the sleeve tattoo doesn't go with the image.
#3 pose is beginner like, the water splash is amateurish.
#2 would work if you had some fill light and she didn't have that sleeve tattoo
There's no need to be critical of a model's appearance simply because you don't like something about it.
Dave, I think the first image is the strongest of this set. That said though, I think those reeds in the background could be removed and it might make the image that much stronger. The few that are visible in that image only serve as something that take my attention away from the subject.
Thanks Michael. The 1st is my favourite. The reeds are a bit distracting now that you mention it.
I agree with you on the comments about the models appearance. I don't see what difference her tattoo makes. Comments like "pose is meh" is hardly constructive either Brian, but I take on board what you said about the images needing some fill.