Real feedback appreciated

Just a few pointers, the first image is good pose excellent light but the retouching needs work, the face is flat and you can see where you retouched under the eyes along the cheeks there is something not right there. the second image is an ok image but it needs more, the subject isn't doing anything but standing there and there is no emotion or expression. The third image is an issue with angle, try not to shoot directly up like this, it makes it look like your shooting up her nose and I can't figure out why her hands are on her face, is she scared or what. The fourth image I like much better but I would work on posing, her pose is good but I think it could be a lot better she looks like she should be lying in bed or in a chair kicking back. The fith image is weird, look like your masking in photoshop is off there is halo between the model an background. The model look very stiff, you should get the model to loosen up a bit makes for better posing. Again not sure what is up with that shadow. The sixth image is ok, it's a decent shot. I myself would rather see her looking at the camera and engaging more but this is your photo. The last photo is good I just am not sure about the black light paint, it looks weird to me almost like it's too thick. but it is a cool look, I have never played with black light paint before so I don't know how that looks. I would say that these are photos that are on there way to being good. I would work on posing, getting models to loosen up a little and photoshop, remember that when retouching that less can be more and you don't need to smooth the skin so much. That is my honest feedback for you. I hope this helps you continue to create great work! :)