First walk: Some feedback how to process this iamge

Hi there,
I'm a amateur photographer from Belgium.

On our holiday in the morning I shot some photos of a couple and their kid while my wife and kids where still asleep. It was a lovely morning with beautiful lightning popping through the trees.
I did not know the couple but I got in contact them later that day and got their emailadress. When back home I emailed them the photos and they really loved them, especially as this was their first walk with their little daughter Kiki.

I think it's just a good photo, nothing more. But maybe with some postproduction I can turn it in a great photo. I did try so, but my results were poor.

Any feedback if and how this can be turned into a great picture?

2 Comments

It is a good picture and would personally try to fix next things:
- photoshop out the brunch on the left side, it takes too much attention
- photoshop out the slide on the back, somehow it draws my attention more than subjects themselves
- lastly try to turn it into black and white;)

I might be wrong in all my suggestions so don't take it as a must thing;)

Hi Martin,
Thanks for the feedback, I definitely try as you mentionned.
Thought the branch was a nice extra detail but you might be right it is distracting

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