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Valle de Pineta — Three Images from Ordesa y Monte Perdido
Three images from a day in the Valle de Pineta, Ordesa y Monte Perdido National Park, Huesca.
Not quite sure of which one
I know it's just variations on a theme. But thoughts on which one is better than another? Maybe I'm just overthinking?
02561 . Vegas II
Sardinia . 2023
Photo: https://lightaffaire.com/all-my-links/?FS Model: Matea
End of coat season
Ady thrifted some faux fur and thought it'd be fun to shoot. She spend the afternoon with me and we shot several of her "furs". I hope you like this one.
Morning sun
Photo taken at small cave enter using one 120cm octa.
1 Comment
Hi lee. I am by no means a pro but I do hate to see someone ask for comments and get no response.
I love the image the things I would personally note are:
1. The eyes should be brightened a little. Make them stand out to draw the attention of viewers.
2. I think the hair near the roots are a bit dark unlike the ends where you see the red.
3. Finally it may just be me but I think her jaw line looks weird. It kind of blends in with the neck a little. As I said I'm no pro so I am not sure how to fix in post. Only thing I can say is watch out for it next time you have a photoshoot.