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Looking to improve my work. Let me know what you think of this image.
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Dan Stiel
Dining Room at Sunset. Taliesin West
Evening just after sunset at Taliesin West. Scottsdale, Arizona. View of the dining room & bell tower.
Hector Reyes
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
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Last: Jul 14, 2026
Hector Reyes
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
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Hi lee. I am by no means a pro but I do hate to see someone ask for comments and get no response.
I love the image the things I would personally note are:
1. The eyes should be brightened a little. Make them stand out to draw the attention of viewers.
2. I think the hair near the roots are a bit dark unlike the ends where you see the red.
3. Finally it may just be me but I think her jaw line looks weird. It kind of blends in with the neck a little. As I said I'm no pro so I am not sure how to fix in post. Only thing I can say is watch out for it next time you have a photoshoot.