2nite I did my first photoshoot. I was happy the client was happy, but i know there is alot of room for improvement. Would love some feed back on two of the photos. I been following the page as a whole for a while but 2nite i decided to creat an account...
I think you did a great job. Hats off to you and your model. The only thing I would suggest is to play around with your lighting. Just to help keep your images from looking a bit flat. Other than that, GREAT JOB!!!!
2nd pic: the red heels got clipped at the bottom. See if you can not cutting off the bottom of the heels.
Nice start. Per John Lee's comment...work on your lighting and make sure you meter your lights
Great work. I agree with the comments.. The lighting seems flat to me. She has curves and perhaps some lights on each side of her might introduce some highlights and shadows. I also found the stool image to be a little static/fixed. Perhaps an angle would help. Also, not seeing the seat of the stool seemed odd to me. Having her rotate her bottom forward would lift it off the seat and also introduce more "tension" in the photo. I'd also like to see one where her hair is perfectly symmetrical down her back and her face is not seen. Weird I know, however if you're going for a static shot with her shoulders squared off to the camera.. might as well go all the way... Great shots.. .keep up the good work...