Comments and criticism please

Shot this today. Any help to improve my photography would be appreciated!
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Reborn

https://fstoppers.com/photo/85908 Bringing to life new ideas and concepts. Photography : Marcos Domenech Assistant: Aya...

Bill with CVP here - some samples

Hi, Bill here with CVP. I am a portrait & glamour photographer. Excited to see how this group develops. Thanks for...
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Client's First Boudoir Shoot

This is a recent image from my client's first boudoir shoot. I added a pink hue to final edit to add a bit of...
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The sofa and me!

Great boudoir photo session that the client ended up ordering multiple images for her place.

black bra

from a recent beauty session. also gave me a chance to test the new Elinchrom 120 cm Lightmotiv octabox.

Love&Jelly

Playing with more Jelly Photography : Marcos Domenech MuaH : Noriko Okamoto Photography Assistant : Aya Tanaka Model :...
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My Motion - Stills work with the RED Dragon

Hi Guys, joined Fstoppers a while ago but haven't been very active on here ,which I am hoping to change. I'm a...

One light shot

https://fstoppers.com/photo/76956
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graceful

This was actually from an audition for one of my cosmetic product clients. I liked this image so much I thought I'd go...

Ring light shoot

https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3359/3175999201_7a643ce74b.jpg https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2622/3967711631_0849bf246e...
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The Hunger

Photographer : Marcos Domenech Model : Aya https://fstoppers.com/photo/75701
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May 2015 Fstoppers Contest

This thread is the official thread for the May 2015 Fstoppers Contest ending on June 1st. In order to enter a chance to...
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Fashion Photographers Take On Glamour

Thats a Versace charm.....so I think it can still count this as fashion haha.
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Hello everyone!

Hey! I'm new to this page! I'm so excited to share my work with you guys and get some feedback :)
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Trying to go Plus Size.

So, last week i booked a shoot with a profile that i'm not used to. C&C are very welcome.
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Hello! Fstoppers, Love this Group

I love to share with you the same passion , this is the first time a nude portrait One Light - Nikon D300s I appreciate...
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Shanghai Rouge

I really i didnt know in wich group post this pics i made few months ago, Im a 3d artist based on Tokyo and i becoming...
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I Didn't Write the Book, but I Shot the Cover

While I did not write this commonly referenced book on glamour photography Successful Glamour Photography. The image...
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first post. cc welcome

still learning. love to get feedbacks.
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